Monday, February 4, 2008

poem

this is a poem that our english teacher ask us to do..
in the night,
i hear____
i see_____
i feel____
i need___
i wish___

in the night,
i am ____

in the night,
i am not____

juz need to fill in the blank..
and guess what i filled??

in the night,
i hear the sound of fan
i see the blinking light
i feel lonely
i need someone to accompany me
i wish i am not alone

in the night,
i am nothing

in the night,
i am not something

here is the comment that my teacher give...
Good Flow

haha...
m i a good poet?=.="

1 comment:

wai mun said...

cant really understand oo...==!